Hi Ciara & Luke!

I've made 3 versions of the intro.

Demo 1 includes same buildup & shortened followup (14 seconds after your arrival to final VO)

Demo 2 includes shortened buildup & shortened followup (14 seconds after your arrival to final VO)

Demo 3 includes shortened buildup & shortened followup (20 seconds after your arrival to final VO)

Skip ahead to 1'20'' on each to hear the changes!

Let me know what ye think! :)

Brendan